“Don’t forget my ten percent”, the buyer smiled greasily and offered his hand. ‘A’ accepted reluctantly.

“It will cost you fifteen thousand. But give me two, I’ll bill you only eight.” They shook hands.

His kid came running, demanding a hug. ‘A’ went to the bathroom. His hand felt dirty.


9 thoughts on “Soiled

  1. I enjoyed the build up – the greasy smile and the dirty hand talk of dirty deeds. I can only assume he is a pimp selling little kids.


    1. Thanks for the comment. I can understand how it could have been confusing for the reader. The story was very clear inside my mind. Doesn’t necessarily translate when the idea gets written. Will definitely keep it in my mind for future posts. Cheers.


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