Two canoes raced each other, covering the distance between the mainland and the tiny islet at furious pace. The late evening sun scorched down at the canoeists. Sweat trickled down their bodies in great rivulets. But they weren’t worried about the sun. They still had an hour of paddling to reach their destination – a tiny islet off the coast of South Male Atoll of the Maldives.
There wasn’t much in their islet except for a freshwater spring and few fruit bearing trees. Luckily the ocean was a source of food. Jamie and Jimmy would survive.
‘Crying shame there’s no WiFi here, eh Jamie?’
‘There’s no electricity here, Jimmy.’
‘Could have gone to a place with basic facilities at least’
‘Every other place in the world has been compromised, Jimbo’
‘Can the Zombies swim?’
‘Hope they don’t.’
‘Well, if they do, we are fucked!’
‘Nah mate! We both are lads here. Humanity is fucked.’
‘Now, what do we call our heavenly little island?’
Jamie looked away.
Many thanks to our Priceless host Joy for hosting the weekly Flash Fiction for Aspiring Writers.
Picture credit: TJ Paris.
Word count: 162
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I too agree that basic necessities have to be met and that included electricity and wifi even on a vacation. love your sci-fi write-ups.
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Ouch! The island name should be Para-die..
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Perfect for a pair-a-douches 😛
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Wonderful story, Varad!
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Your story really does not say that Jaime is a guy and I think that girls can have this name, but maybe Jamie is a guy because they went to the South Male Atoll.
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Of course Jamie can be a girl’s name as well. But my Jamie himself states that he’s a lad. Or maybe his brain has got scrambled by the tropical sun..er…
Thanks for the comment, epic author. Cheers
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Yipes! If two men are all that’s left, then that’s it for humanity. Let’s hope it’s not so. I doubt zombies swim…but you never know. 😉 Cool story! 🙂
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Thanks EA. Jamie is still praying to the tinder gods for salvation
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Interesting perspective on the prompt
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Thank you
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I always love it, when you write these kind of stories…you are great at writing Sci-Fi and likes…maybe you can publish a book on this theme…
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Thank you, Balaka. Long way to go before I start thinking of books. I’m enjoying these flash fiction prompts as it gives me a forum to learn more from fellow writers and hone my skills.
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Love the twist…totally unexpected.
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Thank you 🙂
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They must hope for a girl Friday, better still two girl Fridays,
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Hopefully they don’t run into some cannibalistic tribe.. that would be awkward. Thanks for the comment, Michael.
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Nice one, didn’t see the zombie twist coming. Hope they at least get peace to enjoy the end of humanity!
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Considering that Jamie is already grumpy, I doubt it. Hopefully they could find a spot where they could get network signal. Jamie is still hopeful of connecting with someone on Tinder 😉
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I have a feeling they have to get somewhere that hasn’t been comprised by humans to stay away from the zombies! They may be the only 2 left on earth! Haha! Cute twist at the end. Great story!
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It’s easy to assume that they are stuck in that islet for a good while now. Thanks for the comment, PJ
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A zombie twist, I like it! 😀
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Thank you 🙂
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