Gaia looked at the cargo ship leisurely making its way to the pier. The deck of the ship was abuzz with commotion, a veritable beehive.
Gaia remembered standing in the same spot on the cragged road leading up to the port, many years ago waiting for her father, Luisão. He was a Deck Officer on a bulk carrier that sank in the Atlantic ten years ago. The families cried negligence, the media insinuated arson, but the fact was that all thirty of the crew lost their lives that day and Gaia’s dreams of getting out of her small port-town to study medicine sank with her father.
Isabelle, who was standing next to Gaia, shouted with excitement. She had spotted the crew debarking. The girls busied themselves in retouching their makeup. The tendering boat moseyed its way across the bobbly waters of the quay. The crew, already boisterous, jumped into the shallow waters and started wading towards the shore.
Gaia shrugged and fixed a coy smile on her lips. They were her prospective customers, after all.
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Very moving writing. The loss of the primary breadwinner can really shatter a family. We see it all the time.
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So true! Sometimes such a huge loss might make one just give up and just exist.
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As the eyes dry up, make up makes up. What a poignant tale Varad!
– Anagha From Team MocktailMommies
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Thank you for a nice comment, Anagha.
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That was heart breaking- destiny can be cruel sometimes
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Unfortunately, true.
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Her dreams of being in the medical profession sank with her father who would have provided a launchpad for her ambitions. Sad. Fate is cruel. hope she saves enough to leave this profession.
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Hope is something to cling on during dark and dreary phases of life. I hope Gaia does that too.
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Touching story… not everyone treads on their chosen path. Life pushes them to a different route!
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Unfortunately, yes. The streets of our world are paved with broken dreams and shattered lives. Thanks for the comment, Shivangi.
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So sad that she lost her dreams. That’s awful. Otherwise, this is a beautiful character study. Gaia seemed real to me.
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Thank you for your kind words, EA. Gaia is indeed based on someone very real.
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How sad that because of her father’s death she has to resort to prostitution and give up her dreams of medicine! Great story!
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Thank you for the kind words, PJ. There are many such Gaias in the world, rather unfortunately.
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You are right Varad and it makes me very sad to think about that.
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Heartbreaking. And if this is based on a real story, it is just too sad to bear… Beautifully written Varad.
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It is indeed based on a real story, FP. I met a Merchant Navy officer a few years ago who recounted this particular tale. I might have forgotten the majority of the tale, but the basic story is very similar to this one. I might have changed few things here and there creatively. Thanks for the kind words.
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Clearly not her prefered career, but sometimes needs must.
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Unfortunately, true.
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Wow that is sad. Maybe she can save up enough money to go to school. Might not be medical school, but something better than this. More than one student has put herself through school by working as a stripper.
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Indeed it is possible. When I traveled to Thailand a couple of years back, a massage parlor lady told me that most of the girls in the flesh trade in Thailand save up for their studies or to buy a piece of land in their villages. Once they attain that target, they just pack up and leave the trade for good. Thanks for the comment, James.
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A sad tale of hardship and fate conspiring against her. It doesn’t seem like she has any way out from this life either. Good, honest writing Varad.
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The future might seem bleak for Gaia, but there are instances where people have come back and up from much worse situations. This is based on a real story that happened a few years ago. I hope the girl in that story had a better turn of fortune. Thanks for the comment, Iain.
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Sad about the huge partition between her dreams and reality .
Beautiful language.
Wonderful storytelling .
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Thank you for your very kind words, Moon.
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