pic credit: Dale Rogerson
‘Thanks for meeting me,’ She tugged at the lapels of her thick woolen coat with nervous fingers.
‘What do you want now?’ His words were colder than the wind.
‘Here, I’ve got something for you.’ She showed him the object in her right hand.
‘Oh God! Your bloody thermos again? What’s in it this time? Coffee? Tea?.’
‘This time it’s different.’ She removed the lid, pulled out the ice-dagger and in one swift motion plunged it deep into his heart.
She walked away, the memories of him and his abuse melting faster than the dagger.
Written for Friday Fictioneers hosted by the lovely Rochelle Wissoff – Fields.
Ah, the perfect crime. That was really thought out and planned. Good writing, Varad. —- Suzanne
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Thank you for the comment, Suzanne. Cheers, Varad
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I am tempted to write “Justice is done” here but will refrain since its flash fiction without a back story. Nicely written, Varad!
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Unfortunately, there’s no justifying murder. Even if it is of a bad person, wouldn’t you say?
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I think it’s a difficult question. There are different kinds of killings. I suppose it depends on whether you believe in the greater good.
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And the weapon will be gone with fingerprint and all.
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Indeed! Thanks for the comment, Bjorn.
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So that’s it then. Wipes hands together, three times and walks off…
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Yup! Best part is she doesn’t need to remove the weapon from the scene
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Dear Varad,
Icicle daggers leave no fingerprints. Grisly.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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No, they don’t. Thanks for the comment, Rochelle.
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Perfect end to an abusive relationship!
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Hopefully she might be rid of her inner turmoils. Thanks for the comment, Shilpa.
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Killed in cold blood – very cold! Nice one Varad
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Thanks for the comment, Keith.
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Excellent idea, a vanishing murder weapon, though I found myself pontificating how you would pull an ice dagger from a thermos. I see now how it can be done…
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It can be done, I’m given to believe. Thanks for the comment, Sandra.
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I won’t be sharing your thermos, then. 😉
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Smart, if troubled, lady. Does she find peace now?
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Highly doubt! When has murder ever been a solution?
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doubt *it*
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Exactly. So so sad that sometimes when troubled, we do things that add to our misery in the long run. 😦
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Bravo! No murder weapon, no crime!
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Hopefully the cops haven’t seen Pushpak yet 😀
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Smart way to commit a murder. The murder weapon will never be found once it melts away.
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Indeed! She hopes to melt away from the whole thing as well
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That’s a ‘cool’ way to kill…BTW since long I have wanted to ask..why is your blog named Loose end of red thread..any specific reason?
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Thanks. The blog’s name came to me when I was thinking about a name and I realized I was tugging the loose end of a thread from my pillow case. So I thought why not! 😀
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Really???😂😂😂
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Indeed! No awesome story behind a weird name 😛
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I was expecting something interesting…this was slightly Anti climatic
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Very revengeful of her but i guess he deserved it. Well written, varad.
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Cheers, Neel.
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Wow, I hope he deserved that ending.
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People kill people. There’s no rhyme or reason for violence, however hard we try to justify it.
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Seems like maybe he needed killing. Can’t believe I said that.
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Absolutely! whatever justification we can give will never be enough. But hey, we are humans afterall … the most defective pieces of work in the universe.
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More than one person has made reference to what is going on in society today. Interesting take on the prompt.. 😉
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The more we, humans, progress the more we regress. We’ve been plagued by the same old issues of hate, greed, jealousy albeit neatly packaged in new shiny formats.
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I agree 100%! 😉
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Oh, that was a shocker!
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I shall consider my mission accomplished. Thanks
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How awful that it came to that. Well told story!
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Tipping point, maybe. Thanks for the comment.
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