I’ve been overwhelmed by the support from the blogging community so far in the AtoZ Blogging Challenge. Thank you all very much 🙂
A quick note: This story contains some explicit material. If you are not comfortable with reading Adult content, please do not proceed beyond this point. Cheers 🙂
She trembled as his fingers trailed a lazy path through the contours of her sweat-sheened body.
‘Are you ready, my love?’ His index finger flicked her nipple. He smiled devilishly as she shuddered.
‘I’ve been waiting for far too long.’
The finger circled her navel, ‘Scared?’
‘Yes. How can I not be?’
His wicked finger traveled further down, ‘Baby, it’s time. I love you. Do you love me?’
She bit her lips to stifle a scream, ‘Yes, yes, yes! I do! I love you.’
‘Alright then! Meet me this Sunday at the Railway Station. We’ll elope to Mumbai. I have many friends there. They’ll help us.’
‘But my husband…’ He kissed her protest into submission, ‘Darling, trust me. He doesn’t love you, and neither you, him. This is meant to be. We are meant to be.’
She smiled a shy smile, ‘Alright! Sunday, then.’
He stopped his ministrations suddenly and peered deep into her eyes, ‘Baby, don’t forget to get your jewels and money. We need something to start our lives together with. I want to give you a life befitting a Queen.’
She nodded and closed her eyes.
He smiled. It was just too easy.
That Saturday
‘One ticket to Delhi, please!’
She collected her ticket and walked with purpose towards the platform. The cash and jewels were safe in her backpack.
She didn’t need him, or him.
You have pulled it off, nicely done. She outsmarted the conman but there is a backstory there about the husband. Is he is an innocent victim or not? Wonder if she is travelling via agra (sorry just couldn’t help throwing that in).
I am glad you are getting support, my a2z challenge seems like me talking to myself.
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Ha ha, excellent twist! Nice work.
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Your endings are something really unpredictable. Loving that aspect. Just when I was thinking, either her husband will discover or she will be cheated by her lover, she played her card. Nice.
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Good for her!
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Sure is! Thanks for the comment, Corina 🙂
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Thank god she didn’t go with that rascal!! How men play such games with ease! Don’t mean to generalize here, but it’s mostly the men who have the evil minds, don’t they? Okay, some women do, too! 😅
Really liked how you narrated the scene, Varad.
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There are both genders who are equally into cheating, but yeah, men outnumber women. Thanks for the comment, Shilpa
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She definitely didn’t need him or him. Good end which was unexpected.
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So true. Thanks for the comment, Sushma
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I like the twist at the end. Great post, thanks for sharing.
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Thank you very much
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Oh lol, that was smart of her to get away from him in the end!
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It indeed was damn too easy 😀 Really well written with the right punch at the end.
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Oh yes, like the end – he’s in for a bit of a shock, the rat! 😀
Tasha
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Absolutely loved this one. I really enjoy stories with feisty heroines. And this one hoodwinked them both! 😀
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She caught upto the game and then proved that she was the master. Thanks for the comment, WS 🙂
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Fabulous turn of events. She sure is a smart cookie, and I am glad so. Enjoyed this one too, throughly. Waiting for the rest.
Natasha
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April Anecdotes
Control
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All’s well that doesn’t end up in the well, eh? She did wise up towards the end. Thanks for the comment, Natasha.
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Wise woman. Happy to see that she did not mess up with life second time.
Great twist as usual, Varad!
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She realized that she might never get a third chance. Thanks for the comment, Anagha
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Love the happy ending twist!
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The good guys deserve a win, once in a while. Thanks for the comment, Emily.
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Another story with a twist.
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What to do! Kinda my theme 😀
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Wow! Smart twist that flipped the plot over.. great story Varad !
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Thanks for the comment, Sayan.
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Liked how it ended… A smart one she turned out to be
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Yes, she caught on to the con quick enough. Thanks for the comment 🙂
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Good for her! She’s smart…she doesn’t need either of them.
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No, she has absolutely no need of them. Thanks for the comment, Mahak.
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Ah, good twist! I thought she was going to be a goner, but she turned it round on both of them. Nicely done.
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Couldn’t always let the bad guys win, Iain. Thanks for the comment.
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Please check my ‘C’ post here (Theme-Indian Spices): http://www.vibhuandme.com/2018/04/c-for-cinnamon-god-of-spices.html
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🙂 I was not expecting this end. Quite different.
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🙂 I was not expecting this end. Quite different.
Please check my ‘C’ post here (Theme-Indian Spices): http://www.vibhuandme.com/2018/04/c-for-cinnamon-god-of-spices.html
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Thanks, Shipra. Wanted a different twist this time around.
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🙂 I was not expecting this end. Quite different.
Please check my ‘C’ post here (Theme-Indian Spices): http://www.vibhuandme.com/2018/04/c-for-cinnamon-god-of-spices.html
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She turned out to be a really smart chick
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Indeed! It could have gone so much wrong. Thanks for the comment, Akshata
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Nice twist and what an April fool she made of him
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She did get the last laugh in. Thanks for the comment, Jaishvats
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A smart decision by her in the end. Nicely written, Varad.
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She did wise up just in time. Thanks for the comment, Rrohan.
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I am proud of this girl..A great story as always Varad.
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Everyone makes mistakes. One needs to understand, accept and get out in time. Thanks for the comment, Balaka.
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Wow! What a twist…loved it. I thought she would go with this man and finally loss everything but you portray her in a very smart way! Good step.
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Can’t always let the bad people win. Otherwise there would be no hope left in the world. Thanks for the comment, Sayeri.
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Haha, I loved the twist!
Cheers,
Dream
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I’m very glad you liked it, Dream. Thanks for visiting and commenting.
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Smart woman. Glad she took that before it was too late.
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Yes. She realized that life doesn’t give a third chance. Thanks for the comment, Shilpa
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She sure has learnt to play her cards just right 🙂
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True dat! 😀
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Wow! Loved the twist in the end.
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Thank you, Ruchi
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Loved the way it ends 🙂 Beautifully written.
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Thank you, Seema 🙂
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Oh! Good, she got away from the creep and the other creep too.
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Good things eventually happen to good people. Thanks for the comment, Meena.
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It’s so amazing that she realised what it is to live like a queen- just on time . I am celebrating her freedom with a smile.
Wonderful story.
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Yes. She realized she doesn’t need those two. I wanted her to have a happy beginning. Thanks for the comment, Moon.
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As usual the surprise twist at the end that holds the reader spellbound. Great going Varad!
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Thank you, Jai. Glad you liked it.
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Yet another surprise. She did not fall for the bad guy 🙂 c is for change.. You may drop by my post for a Change 🙂 have a nice day:)
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She did fall, but not deep enough. Thanks for the comment, Deep. Will definitely swing by your blog.
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You can’t outsmart a clever woman, can you? 🙂
Marquessa @simplymarquessa from The Next Chapter
Visiting from the 2018 A to Z Challenge
Start at the beginning with “A is for Afflicted”
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Not even on your best day. Thanks for the comment, Marquessa.
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Wonderfully done! Even the explicit part was done just right, and I believe your reader will be with the protagonist all the way!
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Thanks, Namy. I wanted the explicit scene to come off tastefully, and not crass.
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Glad that she didn’t fall for his tricks! Conning a con artist is no easy task.
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She did beat him at his own game. Thanks for the comment, Shweta 🙂
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She outsmarted both the men. Clever girl. Good one Varad!
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Thanks for the comment, Meha. She did out-maneuver them at the end.
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Nicely done once again Varad. Not over explicit mind and quite tastefully done with an interesting message. Keep up the good work!
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Thanks, Gary. After writing a while I’ve realized the two genres that are tough to write are erotica and humor. There’s a fine line dividing finesse and crass in both. Glad I managed to stay on the better side.
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There is indeed a fine line. That said erotica does have a market. 50 Shades proves that, but it’s not my style really. Innuendo I am better with. So far I’d say you are on the money!
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Same here. I have not been able to go past 50 pages in the first 50 shades. But there are a lot of other books which have handled passion, romance and even hardcore sex in a tasteful way. Thanks for your comment. Much appreciated. 🙂
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That’s 50 pages more than me! As a piece of writing, it didn’t do anything for me at all so I never bothered progressing. TBR pile is too big to waste time 😊
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I am so glad she got away. It all seemed a bit shady to me.
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Indeed! She recognized him for what he was just in time. Thanks for the comment, Nayantara
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