Her high heels make a rhythmic clickety-clack sound, which increases in tempo as she picks up pace. I love that sound her heels make. It’s like heartbeat… clickety-clack….thump-thump…
Ok! I’m not a despo! Please get that into your heads. If you cannot enjoy the different forms of music, well, I can’t help you!
The road is forlorn, despite the flickering street lights. Would it hurt her to pick a different route to go home?
She turns her neck and gives a furtive glance behind. She cannot see me, but it doesn’t hurt to be too careful.
I still remember her from that day – beads of perspiration like dewdrops on a porcelain doll, face frozen in fear, rivulets of gorgeous tears streaming from her eyes, her body restrained by the seat belt of the damaged car, I was sure I saw an angel right before my death.
I would have loved to fall onto her feet and profess my undying love, but I’m dead. The dents of her car bear witness to the fatal wounds in my body.
It’s been nearly ten months, but I’m still bound to her – soul and ectoplasm. At times, I feel that she can sense me, but all I’ve got is furtive glances like the one before.
I can see that she’s almost on a trot now. The reason is not me. There are three shady characters who have started following her from the last street corner.
They pick their pace, she starts running, they start their running…. Time to reveal myself…
Suddenly, they scream and start running in the opposite direction! I laugh grotesquely, not that anyone can hear… But I made sure the three did see a ghastly version of my mangled body from the accident.
She’s now at a gallop, not that it takes me any effort to keep up with her.
She breathes a huge sigh of relief as she enters her apartment compound. The watchman gives her dirty stares, remind me to scare the pants off him tomorrow.
I keep up with her till she reaches her apartment and changes for the night. Hey! Don’t blame me for the small pleasures I’m left with now.
I sigh as she goes to sleep.
This has been my routine for the past year, well except the one day I had to kill her husband for ignoring the signal and ploughing her car into me, killing me.
Good night, lovely one! I’ll be right here!
Note: changed slightly to amp up the creepiness 😁
And you succeeded to double the creepiness which you are really good at. You have some great story ideas
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Thanks, Medha. Glad the creepiness came through as I intended it to.
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Phew! Here I was thinking, ‘Good ghost!’ and then you deliver the whammy.
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Haha! Gotcha! 😀
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Yet another excellent story from you Varad, only that this time it was spooky and the twist had elements which made my hold my breath and laugh too !
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Thanks a lot, Sayan.
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Excellent work on the creepiness factor. Good job.
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Thank you kindly 🙂
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All through the post i was like WTH..until the twist
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Glad you liked it, DeeDee. Thanks for the comment 🙂
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As I ended reading this amazing story, my mind applauded the twist but more than that I loved how you colored the character of the ghost, Grey. On one hand, the ghost protects the lady from the people following her and on the other hand, he made her a widow. I can simply say WOW!!!
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We, humans, are insanely complex creatures who live our entirety in grey. I guess our ghosts won’t be any different as well. Except those filmy ghosts, maybe! Thanks for the comment, Preeti. Glad you liked the story 🙂
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Who would have seen that coming Varad. And I love ghost/horror stories and movies. This is so well written. Kudos again.
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Thanks for the comment, Natasha. Glad you liked this one.
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Amazing twist yet again. You should really focus on short stories with a punch. You are a pro in this genre.
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Thanks for the very kind words, Sonia 🙂
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Simply loved this one.. I love reading about Ghosts and the supernatural and humanifying the ghost was amazing
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Thanks for the nice comment, Sabeeka. Glad you liked it.
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Thank god, I read the story this morning and not during night time. I am super scary about ghosts and this is very creepy.
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Maybe I should have put a disclaimer in the beginning saying this is a horror story. Thanks for the comment, Sushma. I’m sorry if it made you uncomfortable in anyway.
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OMG the twist is super hit I’msure the life after death wud be more interesting now
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Quite possibly. No need to pay for any tickets anywhere I think. 😀 Thanks for the comment, Snehlata. Glad you liked it.
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Brrrr this was a chilling tale though you made it sound pretty human as the ghost confessed to all his follies so brazenly!
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He does seem a little braggadocious, right? Thanks for comment, Shalz. Glad you liked it.
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What a relief that I read this story in the morning and not at night!
Spooky yet so entertaining, Varad
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Thanks, Anagha. As I mentioned elsewhere in the comments, maybe I should have put a disclaimer in the beginning.
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Wow… I hope can sleep now… creepy.. reading at midnight. gave me chills. thank you very much 😉
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Lol! You are welcome…ish, I think? 😛 Thanks for the comment, Priya.
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You spin a wonderful tale. That was a very enjoyable read.
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Thank you, Kalpanaa 🙂
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Fantastic twist at the end! A friendly yet vengeful ghost.
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Thank you kindly 🙂
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Where does your imagination stem from!? Definitely creepy. But he seems nice enough.
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There are more layers to the story than it meets the eye. See if you can find them 😉
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Noo…just when I was rooting for the protective ghost! 😦 Even if it was a revenge death! Great twist tho! 🙂
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Thank you very much 🙂
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Well written 🙂 And I was thinking the first time he saw her was right before dying. Like how the closing lines changes the tone of entire write up before.
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Thanks, Shweta 🙂
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Wow!! That’s all I could say. Simply superb, Varad!!
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Thanks, Rrohan. Very kind of you 🙂
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Creepy, so was he stalking her before he died as well as afterwards? Great twist again, an excellent first week of the challenge, looking forward to more 🙂
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He was not stalking him before death. He just started after her husband plowed their car into him. Thanks for the comment and continuous support, Iain. Onward and upward! 🙂
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A quarter of the way there! 🙂
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I’ve never read a ghost story like this before! Excellent Varad.
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Thank you, Keith.
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There was a smile in my post, all through the post. This post was hilarious and sweet. Loved it.
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Wow! And here I was thinking I’d written a creepy story! Hmm. seems like I didn’t get what I was going for. Thanks for the comment, Balaka.
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It was funnily creepy…. I would love to have a guardian ghost looking over me and protecting me😜😜
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As usual the sudden twist at the end. I was thinking to myself: “Wow! what a noble ghost! Taking care of his beloved!” And suddenly you throw me off balance. Great going Varad.
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Thank you, Jai.
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That twist made it super cool, I can’t help but feel good for the ghost
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I was actually intending the story to be more creepy than anything! Seems like it hasn’t come across. Thanks for the comment, Akshata.
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Creepy yet super cool!!
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Thanks, Dream. Glad the creepiness part came through!
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Usually I stay away from ghost stories. I want to sleep peacefully at night, you see! But this one… I LOVED!!
May I suggest something? Why don’t you make it a full length novella kind using the rest of the letters? I want to know what happened earlier and what happens next!
Superb one, Varad! Too good! 👍👍
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Thanks, Shilpa. I’d have loved to make it a novella, but most of my other posts are already written. Maybe, I’ll revisit this story later.
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This is the first ghostly love story I have read! LOL. He is so dedicated to his love.
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He definitely is! Thanks for the comment, Meena.
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Ha ha ha, that was so creepy and so cool 🙂
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Thanks, Anurag. 🙂 I’ve changed the ending slightly. Do let me know if it works better 😀
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Read it. Definitely better 👍
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This was creepy.. I am so happy that i did not read it yesterday night. Amazing story varad and so far the best one from your bag..
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Thanks a lot, Shipra 🙂
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It is poignant. Reminds me of the scenes from Grey’s Anatomy right after Grey tries to kill herself and meets Danny in the empty hospital
Lakshmi,
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Thanks, Lakshmi. I’ve not watched Grey’s Anatomy. Will have to ask my wife as she has watched the entire series.
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I really liked the driven, love-struck ghost until he revealed his real( vindictive) self.
Great story, Varad.
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Thanks, Moon. I’ve changed the ending a little bit. Do check if it works better.
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Wow! Really liked that addition. Definitely amps up the creepiness.
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He took his revenge but love for the lady still makes him wander. I wonder if she knows she is being stalked by a ghost. Eerie!
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Thanks, Meha. I’ve changed the ending a little bit. See if it works better 🙂
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I almost felt like the ghost myself.
I think I’d have killed her father too :p
Cheers,
CRD
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Thanks, CRD. I’ve changed the ending a bit. Do let me know if it works better 😉
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Aha…now I detest him for killing her husband and for his voyeurism.
Not if I were him though…maybe if I was in his place I’d make it difficult for you to write a story that anyone would feel comfortable reading :p
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Lol! That would be inconvenient 😀
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I’ve written something on Ghouls too…a whole lot of ghouls actually. Hope you like it.
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