Written for FFfAW165
He was perched atop the steel girders, his body full of nervous energy. He watched with fascination at the throng of people bustling about their business.
He hopped from one steel girder to another, almost losing his footing. He sighed, things had become very difficult these days.
He remembered the days gone by, when he was a kid. There was no such crowds there. Only peace and quiet. He used to play to his hearts content with his friends without worrying about bad people getting their hands on them.
He was brought out of his reverie by a huge whooshing sound. He froze in his tracks as he came face to face with the monstrosity. That’s something new, he thought to himself as he bypassed the whirring blades of the giant fan.
Much to his chagrin, he found out that there were four more such fans to cross before he reached his home. Cursing and muttering, he reached home. He smiled at his wife and kids.
Things were much easier when the trees were around. The brand new airport didn’t make things easy for the birds.
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I’m wondering if you were a bird in a previous life! You got right inside its mind. Excellent Varad.
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Great twist and so much truth. We have made things so hard for birds and other wildlife. At least, having taken the trees, we have given them places to nest.
One, thing. It should stopped ‘in his tracks,’ not ‘on his tracks.’
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Thanks, athling. We have done our best to screw up with the ecosystem, right?
Also thanks for pointing the error. I typed the story from my mobile. The auto fill does have a mind of its own.
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Thank you varad
A Special Shoutout to you
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Thank God I didn’t go with my first instinct and write about pigeons in an airport, finding a suitable mark in a fancy suit to poop on 🙂
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Lol! You should have done that 😛
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A clever interpretation.
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Thank you kindly 🙂
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Aah the cost of commercialization.
PS: I am looking forward to reading your book someday. Hopefully soon. Get glimpses of Michael Crichton kind of writing here and there.
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Thanks for the kind words, Deepa. Miles to go…
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Love the surprise twist at the end! Amazing story!
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Thank you, PJ. Glad to be back with FFfAW after a while 🙂
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Nice to have you back!
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This is so identifiable. I remember little sparrows getting trapped and injured by ceiling fans in old houses. Great write.
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Thanks, YS. Actually common sparrows are not so common anymore. My friend is actually running a cause to preserve them.
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True. The chirpy sparrows are a another dwindling species. It is a good effort to preserve them. 🙂
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Somehow, I think they’ll adapt.
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It’s in their DNA, right? But seriously, we have lost a lot of flora and fauna through our urbanization. Thanks for the comment, James.
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I get what you’re saying, and you’re right, but many other species do adapt to changes in the environment. If adaptation was impossible, the last extinction event would have been the final one.
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Great interpretation on the prompt. Most of us don’t realise how difficult it all has been for such little creatures.
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So true! We just take things for granted, don’t we? Thanks for the comment, Shivam.
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