‘Blue and yellow, not a great color combination, but it worked.’ His hand made languid strokes as he colored the model plane. ‘Viola! Now it’s done. This was how your old man’s machine looked.’
‘Wow! I like the colors, Dad. Can you paint my name on the side?’
‘You have to earn your spurs, kiddo. We had to prove that we were the best darned pilots around to be entrusted with such a magnificent machine. Only then did they assign a plane and allow our names to be painted on the side.’
‘What should I do to earn my spurs, Dad?’
‘You can start by eating your cereals without making a fuss.’ He grabbed his son and started tickling, ‘and by getting out of the grasp of the tickle monster…’
Their laughter filled the air.
He paints his son’s name on the model plane, still hanging over his bed. He clasps The Air Force Cross awarded posthumously to his son, and breaks down.
His son sure did earn his spurs.
Word Count: 167
Written for FFfAW week 167, hosted by Priceless Joy. This week’s prompt is from Yinglan. Thanks, PJ and Yinglan.
Touching story. You might want to change spurs to wings, however. Pilots earn their wings. Cowboys would earn the spurs, I suppose.
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The story may have been played out so many times. Great take.
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Well constructed taking us from joy to heartbreak in a twist of words. Yes he earnt his spurs.
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How sad! Thank goodness he has this memory and the plane to help him heal.
You did a great job with these contrasting emotions.
Ellespeth
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Beautifully done – so tender and moving, the laughter and fun before the sadness.
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Thank you, Sarah Ann
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What a moving tale. Nice one Varad.
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Thank you, Keith.
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Yours is a father-son tale too! Such an amazing tale, heartbreaking though.
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Thanks, Shivam
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Touching one.
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Thank you, Anagha.
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Made me teary….well done!
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Thank you kindly, Donna.
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Such a fine sad story,
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Thank you, Michael.
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Tragic ending, beautifully written Varad.
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Thanks, Iain. Glad you liked it.
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My gosh, I love this. It’s a beautiful story and yet so sad. You put a lot of feeling into such a small piece.
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Thank you, EA.
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That was terribly sad, but I must protest regarding the combination of blue and yellow. Those were the school colors of my Junior High.
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Thanks, James. I’m sure the Ukranians will take umbrage about my comment on the colors as well.
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Such a wonderful story! So heartbreaking. He earned his Spurs.
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Thank you, PJ. Have a great vacation time with your family 🙂
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Thank you so much, Varad!
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