‘Do you like dolls?’
Jeannie nodded, her tired blue eyes lighting up for a nanosecond. Joanie took the girl’s hand and squeezed it slightly.
‘I promise, I’ll get you a lot of those cute dolls once we reach the promised land. Ok?’
Joanie looked into his eyes, ‘Are you sure, Jonny? I’ve seen promises turn to ash.’
Jonny looked into her eyes, ‘A month ago, we were strangers. War ripped our families into shreds. But here we are, a new family that rose from the ashes.’
‘Maybe, that should be our new surname – Phoenix.‘
They walked towards the boats together.
Word Count: 100
I return to the tribe of Friday Fictioneers after a few months and it’s fantastic to be back. Thank you, Rochelle for hosting and Ted for providing the prompt. Please click here for other stories.
Very poignant.
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I have seen promises turn into ash….. beautiful !!!
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Thank you
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Just a little bit of hope will help spur them on. I hope she gets her dolls.
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Hope isn’t a bad thing after all. Thanks for the comment, Linda
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In today’s world the risk of disappointments is overwhelming. I hope it works it’s way all the way through
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True, but they don’t have much going for them. A little hope wouldn’t hurt, eh?
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I liked that story, Varad. I hope their voyage ends safely, and that the people smugglers don’t let them down.
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Thank you, Penny. The people who flee from a war torn country are often at the mercy of a lot of factors. Those who make it can count themselves blessed.
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That was a beautiful one about hope in the midst of tragedy
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Thanks, Akshata
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Phoenix is a great last name. Jonny Phoenix sounds like a band name.
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Oh yeah! It does sound like one. Thanks for the comment, Stu
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The dolls seem to represent hope for the future and remind us these are children, even if children who have seen too much. Nice message of coming back from tragedy and finding new connections.
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Thank you for this very nice comment 🙂
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Admirable spirit to keep going and look to the future.
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Nothing to lose, a lot to gain. Thanks for the comment, Iain.
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Welcome back! And such a heartfelt story, to boot!
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Thanks, Dale 🙂 Feels great to be back.
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Poignant story, Varad.
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Thank You, J Hardy
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Dear Varad,
It’s good to see you back amongst the Friday Fictioneers Fold. Your story is tragic, poignant and sweet. Well done.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thank you, Rochelle. Feels great to be back 🙂
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