He sat on the bench everyday, not moving, just gazing into the lake for hours together. No wonder I felt uncomfortable. Not just me, the other women of the neighbourhood as well. We talked to our husbands, boyfriends, brothers, and friends about the weird guy who sits for hours near the children’s play area.
They tried to talk to him, they reasoned with him, argued with him, even shouted a bit. But, he never reacted. Just sat there as if they were akin to the fruitflies that buzz around in the evening.
One of the younger boys started it and it became nasty. They said the guys in the ambulance just shook their heads while they strapped him.
The neighbourhood was peaceful once again.
I met the man after few months, in the veteran’s hospital, when I went to see my uncle Vinny. He was sat there, immobile, on his wheelchair gazing into nothingness.
The nurse shook her head and muttered, ‘Poor guy! All he wanted was to see some water. He’d enough of sand.’
Word Count: 175
Written for the weekly FFfAW hosted by Priceless Joy. Thank you, PJ. Thanks to Wildverbs for the picture prompt. Please read other stories here.
Thought provoking, well done
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Wow, great story, great twist. Made me tear up.
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Extremely powerful stuff Varad.
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Society has such strange standards of judging normal and abnormal behavior. This really made me sad.
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Wow! Great story! Very touching and heartbreaking. The ending was a surprise!
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I had to admit, the part about sitting near the children’s playground creeped me out, but then combat vets come home with a lot of problems sometimes. Tragic.
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Excellent, really good payoff that let’s the reader imagine what he has been through. Nice one.
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Poignant. Introspecting what society we have made ……. !
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Nice take on prompt. Its difficult to judge people!
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You are correct. How do you judge a strange man in your locality? Very perplexing question. Thanks for the comment, Shilpa.
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A touching story.
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Thank you for the comment. As they say reality is much stranger than fiction.
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Tragic, how society treats people it considers misfit!
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So true. Thanks for the comment, Abhiray59.
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Ayyo! So sad. He was so misunderstood!
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Yes. There are lot of people in our society who are misunderstood.
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