After a very travel-heavy week during which I couldn’t get any reading done, this week promises to be a little slow. Hopefully, I’ll be able to read most of the entries this week and reply to the comments on my last week’s post. Another Wednesday and another edition of Friday Fictioneers hosted by our delightful host Rochelle Wisoff – Fields. This week’s photo prompt is from Adam Ickes. Please read other entries to this week’s prompt here.
My friend Stan’s grandfather, Jonah, was a very funny man. He used to make up little rhymes and tell his tales in a roundabout way. Once, Stan and I were climbing a fence when the rickety old thing collapsed. Jonah saw us and sang
Only thing that’s more broken
Than the fence is your pride
Life took us in different directions. I became a wall street slave, Stan went to fight for our country. I visited Jonah few years later and asked about Stan. Jonah pointed at a pair of boots
Little man went to fight and shoot
Big man graciously returned his boots.
The singing story teller, why not? Good stuff
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Thank you
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Sad. Characters are likable. Very well written.
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Thank you very much
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Love the character. Very well-told.
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Thank you, Lisa
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That’s sad, but the old man seems to have known life.
Regards, SLSM.
https://stilllovedstillmissed.wordpress.com/
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Yes, and the follies of it as well. Thanks for the comment.
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Something really sad but still the prose brought a smile. Very well written.
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Thank you, Neel
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I’m sure Jonah would like more than his boots back.
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Absolutely! Thanks for the comment, Danny.
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Loved the prose poetry style of writing.
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Thank you, Piyali.
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Sounds like a fun and interesting character. He seems to have a way to tell the stories.
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He sure does. Thanks for the comment, Priya.
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What a way to tell it… afterwards at least there were his boots.
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At least! Thanks for the comment, Bjorn.
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I wonder what Johan would do in telling a person’s entire life. Seems he summed up things so well.
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Might write something like Paradise Lost, maybe! Thanks for the comment, Stu.
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He knew how to put things in a nutshell!
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He sure did. Thanks for the comment, Andrea.
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Very well written.I feel the humanity of the main. Excellent.
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I would love to meet someone like Jonah.
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Grandad Jonah can see poetry in his grief. He is a noble soul. Rest in peace Stan.
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I enjoyed this, Varad. Telling of stories through verse. Why not? Most interesting fellow.
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I enjoyed the last two lines, the way Jonah communicated his grief in verse. Well written tale! 😊
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Jonah sounds so interesting. Sad story well-written.
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That’s really sad.
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The little man/big man thing is pricelessly cynical. So very well done.
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Thank you for the kind comment, Sandra.
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Cool story
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Thank you, J Hardy.
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Jonah was a funny man indeed. Being funny while conveying sorrow is not an easy thing. Nice story, Varad!
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Thank you for the kind comment, Anshu 🙂
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A pair of boots certainly is evocative. Lots of emotion here, story well told and the verses the perfect touch.
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Thank you for the very kind comment, Linda 🙂
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Great use of the verses to tell a poignant tale. Nice one.
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Thank you for the comment, Iain.
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I like Jonah. A wonderful character
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Thank you, Neil.
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Nicely crafted tale, Varad.
And cool verses.
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Thank you, CE
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Sad tale. Grandad uses humour to shoot the waste home. Nicely done.
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We do tend to use humour to mask our inner feelings, don’t we? Thanks for the comment, Irene.
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Dear Varad,
Jonah had a creative way of conveying his grief. Well layered story between those verses. Good job.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thank you for the kind comment, Rochelle 🙂
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