My First! They never said it would be this messy, and bloody! All they spoke was about the pleasure and the orgasmic high once it’s done. How do I clean the sheets? Mom’s gonna kill me. I’m so done with murder! Advertisements Share this:TwitterFacebookEmailPinterestTelegramWhatsAppLike this:Like Loading... Related 8 thoughts on “My First!” Add yours Good Lord! You caught me off guard with the last line, Varad. Great goimg! LikeLike Reply Love the finale line! LikeLike Reply Made me giggle with delight. Hehehe I wonder to whom he’s been speaking about such things. LikeLike Reply “They never said it would be this messy, and bloody!” I really think that the character is so young to kill anything other than lizards or mosquitoes. 😀 LikeLike Reply Shocking! I thought I had an idea where this was going, but then I read the last line. Great work. LikeLike Reply I really enjoyed the humour in this. The character’s inexperience is well understood. LikeLike Reply Nice job letting the voice of the narrator imply his age/inexperience. LikeLike Reply Gruesome and gave me goosebumps. well written. LikeLike Reply Leave a Reply Cancel reply Enter your comment here... Fill in your details below or click an icon to log in: Email (Address never made public) Name Website You are commenting using your WordPress.com account. ( Log Out / Change ) You are commenting using your Google account. ( Log Out / Change ) You are commenting using your Twitter account. ( Log Out / Change ) You are commenting using your Facebook account. ( Log Out / Change ) Cancel Connecting to %s Notify me of new comments via email. Notify me of new posts via email.