Rain poured like a thousand watery whips lashing on his skin. Yet the rider didn’t stop. He urged his horse to go faster even as his ears strained to pick up noises from the hooves of the horses of his enemies who were in pursuit. It was well after midnight, and the rider knew that he had the best part of two more hours of hard riding before he reached his destination.
He muttered a prayer, hoping for the success of his mission. Ensconced within his robes were the documents that detailed the battle plans of the Mughal army. He had to get the documents to his commander, Lachit Borphukan, at any cost. The Ahom army, with its weak militia, had no hopes of defeating the much stronger Mughal army that had formed alliances with other enemies of the Ahom Kingdom. These documents would give the smaller army a significant edge in the upcoming battle.
His thoughts were disturbed by the sound of hooves thundering from behind. It appeared that the enemies had caught up with him. His steed was stuttering – the poor beast hadn’t been given rest or allowed any nourishment. The enemies with their thoroughbreds were faster and they had the numerical advantage. At that moment, the fort of Itakhuli looked worlds away and the rider was losing hope. He didn’t want to fail his kingdom.
A sudden thought came into his mind. He didn’t know if he should act upon it. What if the stories weren’t real? What if they were only the results of the imagination of fertile minds? Yet, he knew that he was exposed on the road and would soon be overtaken. His mind made up, the rider directed his horse through a thicket into the woods.
The dark forest was silent – even the heavy rain could manage to only trickle down through the thick canopy of leaves. There were no howls, grunts, or screeches. The animals were asleep, or afraid; very afraid. The only sounds were from the hooves of the horses and the occasional commands barked by his enemies. The rider hazarded a glance backward and saw that his enemies were flanking him. He knew that it would be minutes before they caught up to him.
He prayed. Not to his God, but to something else.
The thundering of the hooves increased in volume. He closed his eyes. The end was very near. Suddenly, he realized that the sounds behind him had ceased. He stopped his horse and was greeted by an eerie silence. Where were his pursuers?
A sudden bolt of lightning illuminated the space behind him and he was shocked to see the bodies of his pursuers and their horses on the ground. They had been killed silently, and violently. The rider now knew that his prayers were answered. There were muffled sounds of hooves that were traveling away from him. He hurried on his way towards Itakhuli.
The Ghoda Paak was indeed real.
Note: This story’s backdrop is set against the Ahom – Mughal conflict that occurred between 1615 – 1682. The might of the Mughal army was not enough to defeat the clever and determined Ahom army. The decisive event of the conflict was The Battle of Saraighat of 1671, a naval battle in which the Ahom navy commanded by Lachit Borphukan crushed the Mughal navy.
Ghoda Paak is a supernatural entity from the Assamese folklore. They are supposed to look like humans but with the hooves of horses. Some legends claim that they are helpful, whereas others claim that they are extremely deadly.
There are no available pictorial depictions of the Ghoda Paak. Since their descriptions are close to that of Centaurs, the image of the latter has been used here.
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Superb. The imagery was awesome indeed. Enjoyed reading this. Happy that you took up this theme.
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This read like the prologue of an epic fantasy battle. Wish there was more!
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Thank you, Suchita. I might explore this later.
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With an ally like that you can’t go wrong. Evidently the creature fights on the side that has a disadvantage. I like your opening line: “Rain poured like a thousand watery whips lashing on his skin.”
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Thank you very much. 🙂
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You’re welcome 🙂
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Engaging story. I’m not sure if it’s a good or bad thing that his prayers were answered. It seems like there would be a price to pay. Weekends In Maine
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Not much is known about these creatures. Some times they help people, and sometimes they kill them. It’s just the luck of the draw, I guess.
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I didn’t know we had a centaur concept in India. It’s good to know of more eerie beings like these.
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Our culture is so diverse that we are blessed with countless myths, legends, and lores. I’m enjoying this ride. 😀
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What an exciting story! And it’s so fun to learn about new monsters and mythological creatures.
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Thank you for the kind words. Glad you liked it. 🙂
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I loved the illustration and the story that followed
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Thank you very much. 🙂
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I was chilled just looking at the picture, and then along came your story! Brilliant.
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Thank you, Keith. 🙂
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Ooh, this was a very good read! I’d read more of this story for sure! I love centaur-like creatures…
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Thank you very much, Zalka.
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A rivetting story but a little eerie.Never heard of Ghoda Paak.
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Different cultures have diverse folks, myths, and legends. What we know is less than the tip of the iceberg. Thanks for reading, Suzy.
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well researched and gripping tale.
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Thank you very much
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Wow you are bringing stories of unheard monsters each day Varad. I have never heard of the Ghoda Paak. Great going.
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Thank you, Jai.
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Loved this one. I’d like to see you take this further, more into the mind/world of the Ghoda Paak. So much background to explore.
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It’s a possible idea for the future. Let me do a bit more research into them. Thanks for the suggestion, Stu.
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Although I consider myself a history-buff, I must admit I know very little about the North East. I’m curious to know more.
What a post! You add more mystery and fantasy to folklore.
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Thanks a lot, CRD. We keep learning, or we keep fading.
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I’ve never heard this story before. As usual you are a great story teller!
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Thank you very much. 🙂
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I loved the way you weaved your fiction into a historical battle. And thank you for the Wikipedia links. I’d love to read more about the battle. I love it when the underdog wins. 🙂
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Thank you, Shweta. Glad you enjoyed it.
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The narrative was fast-paced and thrilling. Special points for weaving in a historical background!
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Thanks, Namy.
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