‘Welcome to the 2798th meeting of the 33 club. What’s today’s agenda?’ Irma grimaced, ‘Same old?’
Thirty-two heads nodded solemnly.
William Rambo moved amidst them, ‘Well? Am I in?’
Frederick nodded, ‘The poor man’s been waiting for years now. I say yes.’
‘But, we’ll no longer be the 33 Club.’ Evelyn scoffed. ‘We’ve been doing our best to keep the original number intact. Look, look…’ She pointed at a man running towards the observatory ledge. She groaned and blew hard, creating a gust of wind that blew the jumper back to the 86th floor.
‘Another wannabe. I don’t know why everyone wants to jump off the Empire State Building.’
Written for the weekly Friday Fictioneers challenge hosted by Rochelle Wisoff-Fields. This week’s prompt is from Jill Wisoff. Please find other entries here.
Note: This is a work of fiction. Irma P. Eberhardt, Frederick Eckert, William Lloyd Rambo, Evelyn McHale have the notoriety of committing suicide by jumping from the Empire State Building. Their names have been used only for fictional purposes and not intended to insult their memories in any way.
I like the fact that they can easily keep others from the same fate even if it is just to have a particular number.
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Had to read it twice…actually, three times. Loved the dark humor. Creative using ghosts who want to maintain their exclusivity!
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At lease arguing about the numbers might slow a few of these jumpers down, and maybe give them the time to reflect.
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They always have the Brooklyn bridge which has a much greater number associated to it. Just kidding! Thanks for the comment, Sarah Ann.
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Seriously, cannot understand why everyone wants to jump off the building or rather commit a suicide.
But, you have etched a dark and amusing fiction, Varad.
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We can only speculate, Rohan. Thanks for the comment
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Tales from the other side. Interesting motivations for them wanting to save wannabe jumpers. 🙂
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Every one has their own motivations. 😀 Thanks for the comment, Fatima 🙂
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Very dark and wonderful.
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Thank you, Lisa.
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That was such an interesting take on the prompt. Grim subject, but fascinating to read your interpretation on it.
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Thank you, Susan. The graininess of the photo helped.
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Pretty exclusive , entry strictly by invitation only club. I thoroughly enjoyed this dark tale, Varad.
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Thank you for the kind words, Neel.
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Very clever write.
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Thank you, YS.
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Dark and chilly tale of club exclusivity on The Other Side. Well told, Jilly.
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Thank you, Jilly.
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Dear Varad,
I’m not fond of heights so that would be the last method of suicide I’d choose. Dark and well done story.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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That makes two of us, Rochelle. I have acrophobia and I’m against suicides. Thanks for the comment 🙂
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I belong to a group called the 49’ers. I’m now wondering if there’s something they haven’t told me!
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Time to whip out that magnifying glass and read the fine print, Keith.
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Dark one, but fun in its own way 🙂
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Thanks, Anurag 🙂
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Even ghosts like to keep their clubs exclusive 🙂
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They are real finicky that way. Thanks for the comment, Linda 🙂
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A very good thing that the membership number has stopped increasing… 33 sounds enough to me.
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More than enough. Thanks for the comment, Bjorn.
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That is an interesting, select club to be part of, Varad. It shows some kernel of determination from the jumpers to use such a high building with no chance of survival at the end. Chilling but well written
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Thank you, Lynn. I’ve often wondered why people choose some famous spot or landmark for ending their lives. Maybe they needed to make that one last impact in their lives? I’ve never been able to fathom that.
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Their 15 mins of fame, ending with a splat.
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There was a jumper in our apartment last year. A 20 year old guy jumped from the 13th floor and made a horrible mess on the ground. I can’t even imagine what sort of impact it’d be when someone leaps from the 86th floor of the Empire State Building. Most news reports say that the witnesses heard something like an explosion.
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I’m sure a psychologist could answer the question – studies must have been made – but I think you must be right, one last impact.
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You’ve written a fun, darkly humorous story. Nice work.
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Thank you, Penny.
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When I’ve ever been in my darkest moments, the thought of jumping off a public landmark has never crossed my mind and I’ve never come up with a plan as such. However, it seems like a bit of work to me.
Your story is quite intriguing and could use a bit of an explanation at the end or perhaps a bit of editing to clarify things a little.
They sound like they’ve formed their own exclusive club and want to keep it to themselves, just like many other clubs.
Best wishes,
Rowena
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Thanks, Rowena. I was intrigued by the suicide of Evelyn McHale (one of the names mentioned here) when I read about it a long time ago. She jumped from the 86th floor and landed on a limousine below. The amazing fact was her body was more or less intact and hers’ came to be known as ‘the most beautiful suicide.’
I got the idea of my story while thinking how Evelyn might not be interested in welcoming further members to their little clique.
BTW, thanks for sharing your personal thoughts Rowena. I’m glad you have moved far away from those dark thoughts.
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Thanks very much, Varad. That story of Evelyn McHale is quite enthralling. Landing on a limousine..Thought you might like this poem by Dorothy Parker…One Perfect Rose: https://public.wsu.edu/~delahoyd/parker.rose.html
Best wishes,
Rowena
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That was a very interesting take on the prompt. I don’t believe I would want to be a member of that club! Well done! 😉
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Tempting as it might sound, I don’t think anyone with a sane mind would want to become a member of that group. (BTW, getting entry is really tough, I hear :D) Thanks for the comment, Courtney.
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Actually, in doing my research, I was surprised (though I don’t know why) that the Empire State Building has historically been such a suicide magnet. Guess I’ve always been focused on the Golden Gate Bridge.
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Tallest landmark in the Western hemisphere till 1972, who wouldn’t want to add their name to infamy?
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Certain places and objects are associated with Suicide, both for their reputation, and the fact that you can jump off of them (most of the time) to your death.
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I don’t think I’ll be joining that club… Interesting take on the prompt.
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Thanks, Trent. Entry is near impossible, I hear 😉
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Most interesting take on the prompt, Varad. A weird club to which I would never want to be a part of!
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Thanks, Dale. Felt like writing something weird. The grainy prompt photo didn’t help either.
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Why not?
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A very exclusive club. Having been to the top of the Empire State building, this is not the way I would choose to go!
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The 33 pride on their exclusivity. I wouldn’t want even my enemy to go this way. Thanks, Iain.
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I think anyone who goes up and stands on the observation deck wonders if they could scale the fence. The Brooklyn Bridge is easier, though.
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I found the photo of my grandmother there and posted it. It looks very easy to climb over the edge and jump off.
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There are more safety precautions these days, Rowena including a 10 ft spiked steel fence.
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Thought there would be. I found out my Dad, who is afraid of heights, wouldn’t go to the top and my mum had to go by herself. He says that 12 floors is his limit.
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Someone crazy or disturbed enough to make a splatter on the street wouldn’t be too bothered with fences, I think. I’m sure the security would have been ramped up in recent years but still people seem to be trying. There was an attempt made as recent as 2013. The guy escaped though as he fell only one floor down.
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Real dense question – but are they all dead and hence ghosts who are trying to prevent others from committing suicide?
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Yes. But not because of any concern. They just don’t want any new members in their exclusive club. Thanks, Ashwini
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Very creative story. Nicely done
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Thank you, Susan
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Well expressed.
Suicides are crazy. I wonder why some want to jump off…
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We can’t fathom that, Anita. Why someone decides to end their lives and in many cases in violent and gruesome fashion…We can only speculate about their mindset and other such things, but we’ll never know. Thanks for the comment.
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Darkly amusing, but what is the significance of 33?
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Thanks, CE. There are approximately 34 recorded suicides from the Empire State Building. 33 is just something I came up with to have one pending application to the club.
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