I trudge along the muddy path carrying my beloved’s corpse. The stone steps cut across the grassy slope are all that stands between me and my destination.
I look at her – drenched in blood, her throat slit open. I break down in anguish. Why did she have to die? And violently? The moon peeps from behind the clouds and bathes her face with an ethereal glow. She looks so beautiful and so very dead.
Not for long! Not if I can do something about it!
I climb up the stairs and reach the abandoned cemetery.
I lay her into the muddy confines of a shallow grave and shovel dirt in, muttering a prayer. I sit down near her temporary resting place and begin my wait.
What went wrong? We were so desperately in love with each other.
The clock strikes midnight. The grave starts to rumble. I smile in anticipation.
A slender hand appears through the earth.
Why did she cheat on me with Paolo?
I crunch my shotgun ready.
Killing her once wasn’t enough.
Note: This piece of fiction is inspired by Stephen King’s ‘Pet Semetary’ and is in response to the weekly Flash Fiction for Aspiring Writers (FFfAW) hosted by Priceless Joy.
Word Count: 175
Picture Credit: JS Brand
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What a hateful crazy fellow. That was dramatic.
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Sometimes, love makes people crazy. Sometimes, people just are crazy. Thanks for the comment. Varad 🙂
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Such a unquenchable thrist for revenge! I salute your imagination.. the steps in the photo prompt seemed such a relaxed place!
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Thank you! You know how my mind works 😀
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Wow! Really enjoyed this. Dark and twisted! Great story.
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Thank you kindly, and welcome. Cheers, Varad
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Brilliant Varad, A dark and atmospheric tale which ended with a bang!
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Thanks for the kind words, Keith. Cheers, Varad
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Revenge is best served cold but in this instance, your served it piping hot and twice. Very well written, Vard.
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Thanks a lot for your kind words, Neel. I just hope he doesn’t find a way to bring her back to life for a third time. Cheers, Varad
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Wow, that was great. Genuine twist on a familiar theme
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Thank you for the nice comment. Stephen King is the master of the weird and gruesome and I loved using the Pet Sematary basic premise.
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Yes, Pet Sematary is particularly grim.
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Hard hitting
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Thank you 🙂
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What a twisted end… unexpected and extremely well written👏
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Some times deep love is twisted. Thanks for dropping by and leaving the nice comment, Shivangi. Cheers, Varad
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Oh! I did not see that coming. I couldn’t help but laugh. You smoothly led me down one path and then took a hard left turn. Cleverly written! I really enjoyed this.
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Couldn’t resist taking that turn mate. Thanks did the kind words. Cheers, Varad
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The end surprised me , Varad. I thought she would be revived with voodoo, black magic etc. Cheating in a marriage cannot be tolerated by the affected spouse. The first sentence shocks the readers.
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She did get revived, only he was waiting to kill her again. He apparently loved her too much that turned into hate after her betrayal. That’s his justification anyway. Thanks for the comment. Cheers, Varad
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Wow! Very chilling! The ending surprised me! Great story telling!
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Thank you for the kind words, PJ. Loved this prompt. Varad
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I’m glad you enjoyed the prompt!
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As always 🙂
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Superb story telling !
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Thanks a lot, Moon. Cheers
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Wow, a dramatic gothic tale. He really wants a lot of revenge! Great twist at the end, just as I thought he was trying to save her.
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Thanks for the kind words. Iain. Cheers
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