The SUV trundled along the sun-baked mud road. A man in a three piece suit puffed his cigar, oblivious to his companions’ discomfort. He wiped the sweat from his brow with a silk handkerchief.
“So, how far are we from the site?” He glanced at the landscape outside filled with shrubs.
“Few more miles, just underneath the mountain yonder,” His underling stammered in reply.
“What about these lands?”
“These lands have potential, Sir. Soil tests show that drip irrigation is possible.”
“Screw that! These lands are rich in Rhodium. I need these too. The farmers can get stuffed.”
His gold tooth shined through the cigar fumes.
It’s Wednesday and time for yet another edition of Friday Fictioneers, hosted by Rochelle Wisoff – Fields, who celebrated her birthday a couple of days ago. Here’s wishing her (belatedly) a very happy birthday. Many thanks to Danny Bowman for providing the photo prompt. Find other interesting entries to this week’s prompt here.
I have already started hating that selfish guy. His arrogance has been described vividly by you 🙂
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Nice portrayal.
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Thank you 🙂
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Sorry, spelling mistake.:(
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A great description of an unpleasant soul. Well done.
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Thank you for the comment 🙂
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Super story in a 100 words…I could even imagine the gold tooth shine!
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Thank you very much 🙂
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Great story-telling and love the way you’ve brought the character alive in the story! So much in so few words. Well done, Varad
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Thank you for the nice comment, Esha. 🙂
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Varad, you developed the characterization here very well, and the last line was exquisite. I knew that man. Not a nice man either. Well done.
xx Rowena
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Thanks for the very nice comment, Rowena.
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Not a nice guy. Well done.
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Cheers!
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Sounds like the kind of guy who would say global warming is just something scientists made up,
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Super lol 😜 I think I know one such guy
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i could see his gold tooth shining through. well done.
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Ain’t that a disgusting image! 😛 Thanks for the comment, Plaridel
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I always hope for a good comeuppance for these greedy, loathsome types.
Watching their riches fall and be taken away… Sadly, it doesn’t seem to happen often enough
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Even historically, have such bad guys ever got their comeuppance? Wow! That line of thought makes me lose faith in almost everything
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Well now… that’s a tad drastic…😉
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As the bard, James Hetfield, said – ‘Sad but true’
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“How to make me hate a character in as few words as possible.” I love flash fiction! Well-done!
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Thank you very much! It does seem like a despicable guy 101
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Nice portrait of a ruthless, self-centered asshole (pardon my French). Very well written. The cigar and gold tooth really set the scene.
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Too many movies, Russell! Too many…
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Too many movies, Russell. Too many…
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Hey!!!
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Ugly, greedy, evil man. But you know, they all come to the same place in the end, and all the money in the world can’t fix it.
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So true! These greedy land grabbers don’t realize that they don’t get to own the small parcel of land they are going to end up in.
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Consumer driven world and money trumps everything else. Well done! :o)
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Unfortunately, it’s the way of the world these days.
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Like the others say, this is *far* too common! The problem is people like that are so short-sighted that they don’t realize that their descendants will have to face the consequences of their actions.
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I’ve met few people who don’t care about their descendants. Their argument is my descendants won’t know me or remember me. So why should I bother about them? It’s the ‘me first’ attitude of our times that’s slowly but surely leading us towards an apocalypse.
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The perfect description of a hard-boiled egg.
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Yup! The world is run by a lot of these hard-boiled eggs.
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Well, I wasn’t keen on him at the start of the story, and by the end… good one!
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Cheers, Ali! I hated him even as I was writing about him. So, there…
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Too many people in this world wanting more and more money – perhaps the underling can find a poisonous snake or two. 😀 Nice take on the prompt.
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Haha! May be someone should find a way of getting all such people in a plane and fill it with snakes like that Samuel Jackson movie 😀
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Brilliant Varad. You set the scene perfectly within your opening lines.
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Thank you, Keith
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Great portrayal of one of those people who has too much, takes too much, and assumes too much. Maybe he won’t win this time; I can only hope. 😉
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If not him, someone else. There seems to be a never ending supply line of such characters in our times..
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Yeah, I had a feeling he wasn’t interested in crops. You defined his character very well. I pegged him to be an oil man. Close enough. Nicely written story!
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He could have easily been an oil man! Thanks for the comment, EA.
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Greed and the all-encompassing narrow mindedness displayed. Well done, Varad.
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Way of the world these days, Sascha! Unfortunately for us and the forthcoming generations
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Yes, someone said that people are so much more self-involved these days and I find myself agreeing.
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Not to make anyone who reads this mad, but it sounds like a stereotypical Republican. No concern about matters beyond wealth. Unfortunately this type of story plays out in the US more times than it should. Well done.
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You’d be surprised, Susan. Greed is universal. I would tag most politicians and businessmen along those lines.
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Loved this rattling tale., Varad. Looks some bad times are in the offing.
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Thanks for the comment, Neel. Just another episode in the global epidemic of greed.
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Very nicely crafted story, Varad. Greatly enjoyed this.
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Nicely crafted story. I was nicely mislead by the companions discomfort. I thought it was going to be a kidnapping story. Well done.
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Thanks for the comment 🙂
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Isn’t Rhodium a conflict mineral? … there is a layer here about child work… evil and greed has no end, and after all how else would I get a new iPhone.
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Evil and greed really doesn’t have an end! They happily go hand in hand.
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You’ve written a taut and fluent story, Varad. Nice piece of work! Now, where did you say this place is…? 😉
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Could be anywhere, Penny. Thanks for the kind words.
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Silk handkerchief and gold tooth say it all.. You have painted his rapacity so well, Varad, that he invites disgust from me. great story-telling.
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Thanks for the nice comment, Kalpana.
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Greed! How unfortunate!
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Not according to Mr. Gecko who swears it is good.
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A sad but true story!
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Yes! As James Hetfield sings… Thanks for the comment, KR. Cheers
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Nice exotic take.
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Cheers, YS!
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Sadly, this is how the world works. Great writing, it triggers emotional response.
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Very unfortunately, yes. Thanks for the nice comment, gahlearner. The world sure needs some saviors.
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And yet, more ravaging of the land. Good write.
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I have this mental image of the entire topography of earth crumbling into the cavity created by human need and greed. I’m glad we won’t be around to see that happening. Thanks for the comment, Jelli.
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Are you so sure that we aren’t already seeing it, Varad? Just think about it for a sec. Think of all the sink holes created by our greed for water that’s depleting the natural aquaferes, or our strip-mining & deforestation that is decimating our landscapes. or, or, what about the very nature of the recent hurricanes/tornadoes/forest fires, etc. that are destroying the very infrastructures of our cities. Are you really so sure that we aren’t seeing it, now?
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Absolutely! But these disasters are happening sporadically. What if Mother Earth decides enough’s enough and just collapses inwards?
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That would be bad. It would make a great story, though. A spin on dystopianism maybe.
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I had to look up Rhodium. Another example of human greed over compassion.
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Forget compassion, people are slowly losing their passion.
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Too true, alas. Afghanistan is the Saudi Arabia of rare earth minerals as well as the producer of 90% of the world’s opium, so there is definitely rationale behind the endless US occupation,
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Bang on! Every war has a hidden (sometimes, not so hidden) commercial motive behind it.
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Why do the greedy always win? Nice one, Varad.
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Alas! We are not able to answer the question. Either we are meek or equally greedy.
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It’s the way of the world it seems. Good stuff.
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Apparently so! Thanks for the comment, HH
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Another landscape laid to waste by human greed. A tale for our times.
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Absolutely! Greed has no boundaries and funnily enough people are united because of their greed. BTW, Your reply had somehow crept into my spam folder, Iain. Dunno what’s the issue here!
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Thanks Varad, some sort of technical issue that support seem to have fixed now. Glad you found my comment!
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It was ever thus.
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Sadly! We, humans, are the only species in the planet to hunt its own kind.
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Dear Varad,
I wanted to take his silk handkerchief and ‘stuff it’ where the sun don’t shine. 😉 Well done. You stirred a strong emotion.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Such men believe the sun shines from there! Thanks for the nice comment, Rochelle. And a very belated happy birthday to you. 🙂
Cheers, Varad.
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I wish they weren’t arrogant and inhumane.
Great story, Varad.
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There are worse, Moon. Such is the world.
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Money always seems to win
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Unfortunately, yes!
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