Miguel emerged from the confines of his small, dank hut. He was sweating profusely. His red eyes and the dark circles around them were in clear contrast to the sliver of smile that was plastered on his face. José Luis, who was tinkering with their rundown old Ford SUV, looked up at Miguel with a question.
“Amigo! You need to sleep.”
“Si, José Luis. But, you need to see my masterpiece first.”
José Luis replaced the spanner in his toolbox and wiped his hands on a piece of cloth he kept nearby. Miguel beckoned him into the hut. Once inside, he waved his hand with a flourish towards the small shelf on the wall. José Luis squinted to get more focus in the dark.
“Esto es exquisito, guey.” José Luis was proud of his friend’s accomplishment. He held the small statue of a Princess with her Dragon crafted by Miguel with reverence. When the others doubted Miguel, José Luis was the one who stood beside him. Now they both were vindicated.
“Chavez will burn with envy, Miguel. This is amazing. The colors, the craftsmanship… wow! And absolutely no odor at all. Brilliant!”
Miguel smiled. Smuggling cocaine had just become easier.
Note: This piece of fiction is in response to Al Forbes’ Sunday Photo Fiction Challenge.
Image credit: A mixed bag 2011.
Word Count: 200
Find other awesome entries to this challenge here.
That was a twist I didn’t expect. I wonder if it will still fool the dogs though. Good story.
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According to popular theory, if the cocaine is pure, it will emit no odor when mixed with the right ingredients. Cheers for the comment, Varad
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Great twist at the end, Varad. That was a surprise. Good writing. 🙂 — Suzanne
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Thanks a lot for the kind words, Suzanne. Cheers, Varad
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Good story, but from Miguel’s exhaustion I am not clear on the ‘easier’.
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Thanks for the comment. Miguel was exhausted to invent the process. The regular smuggling would, according to him, become easier.
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Nice twist but will it defeat drug sniffing dogs? I hear they’re quite good.
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Thanks a ton, James. Just FYI, when you mix pure cocaine with cobalt and hydro chloride and make a mould using a plaster of paris base on a high pressure press, the odor goes off. The sniffing dogs have no chance. Then you can separate the cocaine by immersing the statue in acetone. Never tried it, but knowledge is wealth 😀
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What a twist. From loving artists to cold drug dealers. Well done.
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It’s common to see artists among criminals. When both sides mix, makes a potent combination. Cheers for the read and comment, Varad
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Ooh what a twist ending! Nicely done 🙂
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Thank you. Glad you liked it. 🙂
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Very ingenious!
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Thanks a lot 🙂
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This is a fine story, I really enjoyed the twist at the end
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Thank you for your kind words. Cheers, Varad
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What a fun read. Totally unexpected. Thank you.
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Thank you very much for the comment. Glad you enjoyed it. Cheers, Varad
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Masterful writing. The ending was something.
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Thanks a lot Neel. You are very kind. Cheers, Varad
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Great twist — perfectly executed, like Miguel’s deception!
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Thanks for the kind words. Cheers, Varad
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Aha, what an interesting twist at the end, you totally surprised me!
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Thank you 🙂
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I agree with Keith. Did not see the ending coming. Well Done!
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Thank you very much for the comment. This prompt was good fun. Cheers, Varad
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This is a masterpiece itself – I certainly didn’t expect that ending!
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Thanks a lot for the kind words, Keith. Cheers
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